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  1. Philicia
    23 hours ago

    I have published a great book and it was through west bow press. The few copies sold has had great reviews. But I failed to understand the marketing or lack of it. I thought I paid for marketing services. But apparently not enough. I don’t want to invest any more with them because I don’t see the outcome. I believe in my book and I want to market it. How can u help ?

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  2. Renee
    6 days ago

    Hi, Mark,

    How much need I change (including a renaming of) my currently published novel before I could resubmit as “new” work to a different publisher?

    Would the book past existence prejudice future acceptance toward publication? Would I even need to specify a previous incarnation of the book?

    Is it best to cancel my current publishing contract, then to submit my book to an agent and/or publisher toward a better publishing situation? What are my chances of success that way?

    Thank you | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Renee, that’s a great question but a difficult one to answer. Every agent and publisher will have a different opinion. Yes, there will be a negative bias if agents/publishers know you published an earlier edition (if it didn’t sell a lot of copies). But if you change the title and didn’t sell many copies it’s less likely to be an issue. Did you self-publish or is the book with a traditional publisher meaning you didn’t pay anything? Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  3. A. Matthews
    8 days ago

    What would capture the attention of a literary agent should the author be someone that has not been published before? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi A. Matthews… your question is so good that I’ve devoted my entire website to it. ;) I recommend you start by listening to my complimentary mp3 that you can learn more about (and get access to) here: http://literary-agents.com. Then take a look at my fr*ee guide to help you get a literary agent here: http://literary-agents.com/get-a-literary-agent/. If you do that you’ll probably find what you need but you can always post more questions right here. Happy to help. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  4. Tyrone Bruinsma
    9 days ago

    I’ve emailed a gaming company -Guerrilla Games- who developed the Killzone series and they said they would be interested in my novel, but they said that they would only consider it if it were officially published.
    Which means I need a publisher ASAP. Which is the most successful action/military publisher in New York?
    I’m also looking to possibly get this developed in Asia(primarily China or Japan)-Do you know any publishers in that area?
    Thanks | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Tyrone, congrats on getting interest… but 9.5 times out of 10 you need to get a literary agent to get a publisher. Check on this article on my site about this topic: http://literary-agents.com/guide-to-literary-agents/do-you-need-a-literary-agent/. It’s part of a series. If you get a literary agent and publisher here in the US, they will then help you get published abroad. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  5. Marcus E.
    10 days ago

    I’ve been having a lot of this response to my submission attempts:

    “Thank you, but we’re not enthusiastic about selling your book” and “maybe you’ll have better luck with another agent”.

    Now, I’m unsure if it means “your concept sucks” or if it’s “we don’t know how to sell this to publishers”. I’d like to think it’s the latter, but I’m hoping you could elaborate that response for me. Do I need to start going directly to publishers or just give up and find another calling? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Marcus… don’t give up. Read this article: http://literary-agents.com/get-a-literary-agent/literary-agent-feedback/. And don’t call it quits. Very few publishers accept unsolicited direct submissions from authors. Your best best is to improve your query and/or book. If you haven’t already done so, consider taking advantage of this introductory consulting call that I offer here: http://literary-agents.com/book-marketing/book-marketing-coach/. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  6. Cindy
    10 days ago

    I have been submitting query letters for my true crime story with many rejects, of course. I have been told that despite the poise and polish that it’s not the right fit. On the other hand another suggested that I work with an editor or collaborator to smooth out the writing. What is your suggestion for my next step and how do I get an editor without an agent. Are you a collaborator and editor?

    Cindy | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Cindy, as long as an agent doesn’t recommend a particular editor or collaborator… it might be legitimate and good advice. But you might be closer than you realize to getting represented and simply need to send out more queries. How many have you sent out so far? Also, you don’t need to have an agent to get an editor. You just need to be willing to invest the money. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  7. Kimber
    12 days ago

    Hi Mark! About 4 years ago when I first started taking writing classes, I won a local contest that resulted in a MG choose-your-own adventure style book being published. They also agreed to publish 2 follow up books in the same series. But all they really did was pay the createspace fees so the books are basically self published. I’m in the process of writing a YA book that I’m hoping to find an agent with. Will having those other books out there, make it harder to get an agent? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Kimber Reply:

    I should also mention the books in question were never marketed and haven’t sold much. The contest people didn’t market them and I didn’t know how. They also could have used a better editor because I’ve found some mistakes in them.

    So they may not show my work in the best light between the errors and the low sales numbers. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Kimber, yes… it will almost certain negatively impact your efforts to get literary agents interested. But it’s still quite possible. I help people do it all the time. Your best bet would be to remove the books entirely offline if you can. Then you won’t have any problem at all. That would be the easiest way to go. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Kimber Reply:

    Thanks, Mark. I really appreciate you taking the time to answer my question… to answer all of our questions here. It’s really awesome to find someone who is willing to help us newbie writers.

    I’ll definitely see about having the books removed before I start shopping for an agent. Thanks again for the advice. :) | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Sounds good. Feel fr*ee to post more questions. And consider scheduling an introductory call with me before you send your work out… if you’re able to do so. I can do a lot more for you there. Here’s a link with more info if you aren’t already familiar with it: http://literary-agents.com/book-marketing/book-marketing-coach/. Either way, I look forward to (hopefully) being part of your success story. Have a great weekend. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent


  8. Jean Gendreau
    16 days ago

    Dear Mark,
    While investigating a murder in 1886, a couple gets together. So my book is a mystery, a romance and historical fiction. I am planning to market it as a mystery because in subsequent stories, the couple solves more crimes as their relationship grows. Should I just go to agents who do mysteries or should I also try romance agents and women’s fiction agents?
    Thanks, Jean G | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Jean, excellent question. Agents interested in all three genres would be your best fit. If you strike out with those agents, then you have to start approach agents that are interested in only two of those categories, etc. That’s how I would approach it. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  9. Juanita Aydlette
    17 days ago

    Hi Mark. Will I still have a shot at getting an agent if I self-publish first? There are some things, such as artwork and choice of book-cover photo that I want to maintain. My brother is a wonderful, closet-artist, and I would love to have his artwork gracing the front and back covers of my book. I thought of having a few dozen copies printed to sell at a local bookstore here, and also put on consignment at the Walmart store where I use to work. We had one published author at that store. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    A lot less likely, unless you sell MANY copies (numbers vary based on genre, agent, and publisher). It’s possible to do it without those numbers, but it’s significantly harder. I would try not to be too attached to things like your title, the artwork, etc. Publishers have a lot experience. They know what will sell and what won’t… at least more than most authors. So there is a good chance that they might want to change a few things. But you can always cross that bridge when you get to it, as they say. Hopefully you won’t have to! Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  10. sawlian cheah
    19 days ago

    Hi Mark

    In Michael Larsen’s ‘How to write a book proposal’, he said in the proposal, we need to read about 10 competing novels and as many complementary books for a comparison with our manuscript.
    Must it really be 10 books for each category? Seems like a lot. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi SawLian, reading that many comparative titles is great… but you only need to compare/contrast 4-6 titles per category in my opinion… in the proposal. That should be plenty in my experience. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  11. Doris Konate
    19 days ago

    What is the procedure for submitting a fiction book for movie production? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Doris, it depends. Are you talking about a book that’s unpublished, self-published, or published with a traditional publisher like Random House? Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Doris Konate Reply:

    Hi Mark,

    Thanks for your quick response, the book is my first, fiction, self-publishing through Outskirts, which should be completed at least by end of August early September. I called Tyler Perry Studio’s and they told me that any work submitted for movie production had to be submitted through an established literary agent. I feel that the story would be great movie material and I’m trying to figure out what my next step should be so that I could try and submit the work for movie production. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Doris, not a problem… I genuinely enjoy taking a few moments each day to answer questions for appreciative authors. Based on your situation, you will need to get a literary agent or film agent to pitch your work for you. But literary agents probably won’t be interested unless you’re going to let them shop the book to publishers as well. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

    Doris Konate Reply:

    Hi Mark,

    Are film Agents commissioned pretty much the same as Literary agents commission post productivity? | Ask a Literary Agent

    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Doris, yes… film agents work similarly to literary agents in the sense that they should only be getting a commission for work they’ve sold or helped sell. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  12. ART
    26 days ago

    Might be a dumb question however I am not a writer but feel it extremely important to write a whistle blowing type book. Been in a business for 15 years and found dirty filthy secrets that affect all of us especially our children . Very surprised a book has not been done before . My question is can a agent or publisher steal my idea by finding a true writer just like what happens to inventors? If yes how do I avoid the theft. And yes I think this information would be big news for a book. thanks | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Art, it’s a good question so thanks for posting it. More likely, an agent or publisher would try to pair you up with a qualified ghostwriter to help you produce the book. But you’d have to write a compelling pitch explaining the project well enough so they could understand it and see its value. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  13. Jon Glapa
    29 days ago

    If you have a verbal offer from a publisher (complete with an advance) that you bring to an agent to a) help secure an agent for the future, and b) help negotiate the contract — is it okay to ask for a lower fee than 15% (maybe 12 or 10%) for that particular book since half the job is already done?

    Thanks,

    Jon | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Jon, it’s generally a bad idea to try and reduce the commission (although I get it). For starters, the agent might be able to increase your advance and improve your royalty terms (among other things in your deal)… and/or get other publishers interested (if you move fast). Also, even though it makes sense to a degree to make such a request… I’ve had it done to me and it leaves a bad taste in the mouth. You want your agent on board 100%. I wouldn’t do it. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Jon Glapa Reply:

    Thanks for your advice. It’s good to get an agent’s point of view. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    No problem Jon, happy to help. Let me know how it goes. Would love to help celebrate your success. There aren’t enough of those stories to go around. ;) Mark | Ask a Literary Agent


  14. Elias
    29 days ago

    Hi Mark,
    I’m highly impressed with your insights (and the quick responses). Wow!

    My question revolves around building buzz for an unagented/unsold/unpublished manuscript. I’m working on my second novel and would like to start having art contests, etc, to help create visuals of characters, settings and scenes. Would an agent and/or publisher have any issues with that? In other words, is there any reason NOT to do so? My inclination is that any and all buzz is good.

    Best,
    Elias | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Elias, thank you for the kind words and it’s good to see you here. Happy to help. Anything you can do whatsoever (for the most part) to get more exposure and/or build your mailing list pre-publication is a good thing. Your idea falls into that category. So I say go for it. Thanks for posting. Looking forward to learning more about you and your work. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  15. Franka
    33 days ago

    Hello Mr. Mark.

    Thank you very much for your information in your website. It is very helpful, especially for me.

    I am Albanian and I am a first time writer. Recently I’ve been reading on Internet about literary agents and the book business but I still don’t understand it very well. My novel is in Albanian. I have been asked for a partial of my manuscript of 2 literary agencies.

    Translating a book costs a lot of money here but my question is: Is it worth it? The fact that they asked me a partial and I am hopeful that they’ll like it, is a good start, but how much guarantee may I have about getting published? How many possibilities may I have? Also, it may sounds like a very stupid question but, can I trust them? I’m so far away from America or UK.

    I’m only 17 and I know I’m very young but my fiction novel is a very good one.

    If you could help me by telling me how should I act, you’d really help me because I’m a little bit confused in here.

    Thank you very much for your time and sorry for my bad English. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Franka, if your query is getting interest from US agents that is a very good sign… but no guarantee that they’ll be able to get your work published here. However, the fact that you have interest is the best guarantee you can get that your work might sell here. So it would be a reasonable investment for you to get some sample chapters translated as a start. Have you published your work outside of the US? Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Franka Reply:

    Hey Mark,
    Thank you for your information. So you suggest me me to translate and send some sample chapters?
    Yes I have published my book here but I haven’t done too much copies and also it has been just for pleasure. I have sold it at my friends, family and some well known writers who made every great comments which push me to ask for literary agencies.
    I am concerned about something else. Is it okay if a literary agent who is very well known, makes grammar errors in writing?
    Thank you! | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Franka, if literary agents are interested… in my mind it’s worth the investment to have some sample chapters and a synopsis translated. Regarding grammar errors, I wouldn’t put too much weight on that. The agent might have been writing in a hurry or it might have been an assistant, etc. I’m guilty of those mistakes myself. Good luck and keep me posted on your progress. Wishing you well. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent


  16. sawlian cheah
    43 days ago

    Hi Mark

    In the TOC, do I indent my chapter outlines at the first line and do I double space the lines? Why do we need to double space everything in the book proposal and in the manuscript? Is it for easy reading? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi SawLian, I would single-space the chapter outlines and most of the proposal with the exception of the sample chapters. Indenting doesn’t matter for the chapter outlines. Agents have different preferences for many of these things. Double-spacing for sample chapters and manuscripts is standard for everyone as it makes it easier for agents and editors writing comments. Make sense? Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  17. jg
    47 days ago

    I have an novel that in its earlier drafts was shortlisted in the international Dundee (unpublished novel) Prize 2010 and Virginia Prize 2011. I am British but living in Africa and completing my final edit. It is based on a true story. Years ago I submitted as memoir and an agent wrote to say she was interested but her boss said memoir was flooded. Is it best to send the book as literary fiction or memoir? Also, what would be the difference for me getting a UK or US agent while in Africa? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi JG. Congrats on your accolades. Your story sounds promising. Every market is flooded, in its own way. I recommend you submit the book as memoir since that’s what it is, and approach US agents first. Then, if you haven’t gotten an agent, pursue UK agents. I don’t have space to explain why here but that is your best approach. You should consider setting up a call with me. More info here: http://literary-agents.com/book-marketing/book-marketing-coach/. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  18. Wukelanren
    53 days ago

    Hi Mark! I have a new question for you > If the 1st book of the trilogy was released by one publisher, can I query a Literary Agent with the 2nd book of this trilogy, so the agent could find another publisher? Will it effect in any sense on the publisher, which released the 1st book?
    Thank you!
    Yury | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Yury. Although it might be possible to find another pub for book #2 in a trilogy, it’s highly unlikely. If you’d already sold tens of thousands of copies of #1 you’d have more of a chance. Pitching #2 as a stand-alone book (if possible) would increase your odds. And check your contract to make sure Pub #1 doesn’t have an option on #2. Sorry to not have better news. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Wukelanren Reply:

    Hi Mark! When I was signing the contract, I asked the Manager about that. I said: am I signing the contract for all books under this title?
    He said that: You’re signing a contract only for one (first) installment. If you prefer to create series based on this title, you have to submit it to us in usual form and we will decide to accept/decline the project.
    Thanks,
    Yury | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Yury, I understand that… just make sure you read your contract to see if it says anything about future titles. You might not be committed to publish a second book with them, but they might have what’s called an option. Read your entire contract and make sure you understand everything. And have a great week. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent


  19. Wukelanren
    56 days ago

    Hi Mark! I’ve sent a letter to 1 publisher and received this answer. Do you know what this supposed to mean? > Thank you for your inquiry. Please know, however, that we are no longer accepting submissions for YA (we have recently updated our Web site and our Publishers Marketplace listing to reflect this change).
    For the youth market, we’re interested in middle-grade novels and chapter books only.
    Wishing you the best of luck.
    They changed that after few hours of my submission!
    Thank you
    Yury | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Yury. It simply means they used to publish books in the young adult genre and, unfortunately, they recently decided to stop. Middle grade books are for younger readers, as are chapter books. I wish I had better news for you. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Wukelanren Reply:

    So, that’s a rejection? And they won’t consider my work?
    Thanks
    Yury | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    I’m sorry to say so, but yes. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent


  20. Kara
    58 days ago

    Hi, I was was wondering if as an agent, you’d ever rejected a piece of work that was written in second person? Do you, or any other literary agent you know, bother reading second person writing? I don’t mean those choose your own story type of books, but long, narrative books with a good plot, character interaction, etc? Is that particular form of writing something that most agents won’t take on, or does it matter? I wanted to know in case I submitted one. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Kara, my point of view on the best way to write a book (any book) or anything at all for that matter… is to use the style that’s most effective to tell the story or make the point. There are many books that are published written in second person. And any good agent will consider your work if it’s written that way, if it’s well-written. So focus mostly on writing the best book you can, and trust that agents will see your vision. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  21. Tikaani
    58 days ago

    Hello I had a question about identity as being a writer. See I do not want people to know who I am, right now most people do not. I am only known as Tikaani Moon, the image of a black wolf. I would like to keep it this way and never let others know my real name. I feel strongly about this decision but wondered was it possible for me to do this. I feel my pen name image better fits my books and is more interesting. Is it possible to keep my identity secret? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Tikaani. It is possible to keep your identity secret… and, in some cases, it can be used as an advantage for marketing purposes. To maximize the effect, you might consider having a good reason and/or story behind why you want (or it’s necessary) for your identity to remain a mystery. Thanks for posting. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Tikaani Reply:

    Is Tikaani Moon okay? I wanted something that no one else have and suit the image of a dark wolf howling at the moon at night. This is what I developed already. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Tikaani, I don’t see it as a problem. Pretty much any name you use will be okay as long as it isn’t offensive or misleading somehow to agents, publishers, and readers. You can discuss this more with your literary agent, and you should. Have a great week! Mark | Ask a Literary Agent


  22. Craig Seaton
    59 days ago

    Mark,

    The answer to my question about where to place punctuation when using quotation marks is a bit too involved for a blog post; so here is the very best online grammar source I’ve found. There’s an American method (punctuation always goes inside quotation marks; and a British method which has some exceptions).

    http://www.grammarphobia.com

    The site is authored by Pat and Stewart O’Connor. I would highly recommend their site and any of their books to your readers.

    Blessings!

    Craig Seaton | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Craig, thank you for sharing this… I believe one or more of their books is on one of my bookshelves. ;) And I’m glad you found their site, because the answer to your question is even longer. The answer is, as is the case with lots of things when it comes to language, it depends. The most important thing to do is choose something, and be consistent. Happy writing. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  23. Ed Schroeder
    59 days ago

    Hi Mark,

    My military fiction book, Duty, Honor, Country: Kill, Capture or do Nothing was just published. As you know today the author is responsible for most of their own marketing. I would really like to have my book carried by the Military Book Club or any of the other big book clubs. I have searched all over the Internet but have not been able to find information on submitting a book to these clubs. Any help would be greatly appreciated.

    Best regards,
    Ed S. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Ed, to tell you the truth I don’t know a lot about this. When I was an agent, publishers always handled it. That said, I wanted to know the answer so I started looking online. Check out this link: http://www.bookmarket.com/sellingtobookclubs.htm. I’ve met John Kremer and he’s good people. Here’s another link but I don’t know these guys: http://www.inktreemarketing.com/Articles/BookClubs.htm. Let me know what you think. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  24. Wukelanren
    62 days ago

    Hi Mark! I have sent a query to one agent and received an auto-responce with these words: if you have books published please tell me the name of your publisher(s) and the year the book(s) were published.
    Do I have to resend a query with the name of a publisher that will publish my book this year? Or just leave the query like it is?

    Thank you
    Yury | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Yury, you should definitely tell agents that you have a book being published… especially since it’s by a legitimate publisher. It will give you added credibility. Even if agents don’t ask, you should tell them. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Wukelanren Reply:

    Hi Mark! I told about it to the agent in my query, but I didn’t tell the name of the publisher. And.. I don’t think that she would request for more parts of the ms. Don’t know why.. maybe I just feel it.
    Yury | How to Be a Famous Author

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  25. B
    64 days ago

    What would you say the difference is between going with a mainstream / big time publisher and going with a small publisher? I know big time is more reputable, but to who exactly? Do they get better distribution if a big time publisher? And also my understanding is that YOU, the author has to do most of the promotion and publicity these days so does it matter at all who you’re published with? Pros/cons please — or maybe an article out there somewhere? Thanks! | Ask a Literary Agent

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    B Reply:

    Also, do you get a bigger advance if you go with a bigger publisher? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    In general, yes. Bigger company = more resources = bigger advance. In most cases. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi B, the short (and probably frustrating) answer to your first question is… it depends. In general, I believe you’re better off with a bigger publisher. Across the board, you’re going to have more resources and more reach that way… to augment your own promotional efforts. You’re right that this would make a great article, but it’s one I haven’t written yet… so I’ll add it to my ever-growing idea file. ;) Thanks for posting. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  26. doug
    65 days ago

    Eight rejections in,there is finally some agent feedback.

    “I’m not connecting wholeheartedly with your writing,despite its poise and polish.”

    Translation?

    This from a query and ten pages.I’m also twice his age.

    Any insight is greatly appreciated.Thank You. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Doug, sorry to hear that… this article that I wrote might help. Let me know: http://literary-agents.com/get-a-literary-agent/literary-agent-feedback/. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  27. Michael Rowland
    68 days ago

    I’ve written a children’s picture book and a publisher wants buy the rights.

    I read the book to over 300 children and the response was OUT OF THIS WORLD!!!

    The publisher want’s to know how much I want???

    Can you help me please?

    Thank you

    Michael | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Michael, I love it when someone has good news to share. Congratulations on having such a wonderful problem. There are many variables to consider, however, and there is no way that I could possibly know what kind of advance you should be hoping for. My suggestion, without having more info, would be to ask the range (low to high) that they usually pay for your genre… and go from there. You can probably find some of this online as well with some searching. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    You might want to set up a 1-hour consulting call with me: http://literary-agents.com/book-marketing/book-marketing-coach/. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  28. doug
    71 days ago

    Good evening, Mark
    Perhaps you’ve addressed this question many times before,but here it is again.
    I comprehend English when a submission page states a rejection from one agent of the agency is the same as a rejection from the agency in toto.
    If such a statement is not found,is it fair game to query another agent from the same agency?
    I comprehend decorum/protocol,and don’t wish to inadvertantly stomp on any tootsies. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Doug, in short… yes. At least that’s how I advise my 1-on-1 coaching clients to interpret the lack of specific instructions. ;) Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    There is a chance that one or two agents might get uppity about it… but, hey, if that’s what you want… say so. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  29. Wukelanren
    75 days ago

    Hi, Mark! It’s me again)) Can you give an advice?
    Well, the thing is that I’ve made some video, it’s a book trailer actually, and I thought, do I need to tell about it to my publisher, after I’ll receive the book cover and add it into the video? I mean, before I’ll post this trailer in the net?

    Thank you,
    Yury

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Yury, it’s always best to keep your publisher in the loop about your promotional activities. Sometimes they will want to provide input. Other times they might even help finance certain things (just don’t tell them I told you that). I’m sure they would be happy to provide you with a cover image as soon as it is ready. Make sure you tell me when it’s done! Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  30. Belle Degenaars
    75 days ago

    Good morning.
    I am interested in publishing a book I recently translated from Italian. It is the history and story of a small village preserved in time so to speak from which my grandparents emigrated. I have grown up hearing stories of this ancient village and have now translated a book written about it’s history. It is non fiction and would appeal to readers interested in history as well as students of Italian language and culture. I am interested to know how to pursue identifying an agent. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Belle, thanks for posting. I have a great deal of valuable information on my website that will help you, starting with the complimentary mp3 that you can get on my hompeage here: http://literary-agents.com. You can also access my Directory of Literary Agents by clicking here: http://literary-agents.com/directory-literary-agents. You can get 1-on-1 support from me in three different ways. Learn more here: http://literary-agents.com/book-marketing. I’m looking forward to learning more about you and your work. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  31. Wukelanren
    79 days ago

    Hi, Mark! Today I remembered about a responce from Lit.Agent and thought, Did any of your clients ever received such a responce: I’m not qualified enough about your work. I’d be glad to reffer you to other agents, but I don’t know such.
    What a responce, right? That reply I received about a year ago on the book that will be out soon..

    Thanks,
    Yury | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Yury, good hearing from you. It’s virtually impossible to interpret that kind of literary agent feedback without more information. Could mean they’re not knowledgeable about the genre or have connections in the category. It sounds sincere, if the agent really would follow up with referrals. So take it as a compliment. :) Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  32. Jim Glaim
    80 days ago

    I don’t know the numbers of sales as my former publisher denied any. But when I saw some of the 26 online sellers reordering my book even after I cancelled my publisher, and the prices they are being sold at, I suspect it is a sizable amount. I tried to find out from Lightening Source, but they said they could not give that info to a 3rd party. I said, excuse me, I am the Author and 3x copyright holder, I am 1st party. It did not help. Can I compete with my own book via an Agent? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Jim, even though it’s your book… the publisher created a contract/ agreement with Lightening Source so they probably aren’t going to give you any information. You really should contact an attorney. Also please explain what you meant when you said: “Can I compete with my own book via an Agent?” In what way??? Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  33. Jim Glaim
    80 days ago

    Greetings,
    My publisher denied any sales and went bankrupt. Twenty six online sellers have been selling my book worldwide and I get no part of it because they were set up under the publisher. I cancelled my publisher. The last I checked my book was being sold for $18. -$32. per copy and reordering. I tried making it an eBook with no success. My website is not available as I need to renew my subscription. Can you tell me how I can get s slice of profit from my own book? I have 3x copyrights. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Jim, I’m very sorry to hear about your story. It’s hard enough to get published, and then this. If they went bankrupt, I’m not sure what you can do except get in line with everyone else they owe money and try to collect. I don’t see how you would be able to do this without contacting a lawyer. If I were you, I’d be putting most of my energy into figuring out how to get the rights back so you can sell it yourself and find a new agent/publisher. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  34. Sydney Cade West
    82 days ago

    Mr. Malatesta, does the fact that I’ve independently published four novels, prohibit an agent from picking up my work from Amazon? I own and retain all national and International rights.

    Sydney Cade West | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Sydney, not at all. But the better your sales figures are, the more likely they are to be interested. Several thousand copies sold of each title is a good start. It’s possible to place something that has sold less, but it’s more difficult. I hope that helps. Feel fr*ee to post a follow-up question. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  35. Margie Church
    82 days ago

    I have two questions! How often do you think agents select a book based on the body of work they represent vs. something new and exciting? I know they are in it for the money – and so should we – so safe is easier?

    How much do you think coming from eBook publishing is going to hurt my chances of getting an agent – even with a significant back list and some good success?

    Thank you! | Nicholas Sparks Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Margie, one clarification question. Do you mean based on the body of work that the agent represents… or the body of work of the author, who might already be somewhat established in a different genre? Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Margie Church Reply:

    I’m sorry – the body they represent. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    No worries, but glad I asked. Big difference. Most agents are very slow to branch out into a new genre. It’s similar to a successful author of a genre deciding to “roll the dice” and try out a new one. It’s an investment of time, without any guarantee of success. Plus there is a learning curve since each genre has its own “rules” or conventions. Your previous pub experience could help you or hurt you, depending on your numbers. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

    Margie Church Reply:

    Thank you. | Ask a Literary Agent


  36. John Silver PhD RN MBAC
    82 days ago

    HI,
    I have just published my first book using a hybrid publisher after being jerked around by Springer Publishing for almost a year. How many sales would I need to attract the attention of a major publisher? I ask because I am starting my second book now and the effort with getting this first book published was tremendous.

    The book is titled “just a union…of nurses” and is now listed on Amazon.

    Can a literary agent be helpful? In what way? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi John, thanks for posting. Sorry to hear about your experience with your publisher. The numbers you’ll need to impress agents and/or new publishers will depend on many things… how long the book has been out… genre… who the original publisher was… etc. In some cases a few thousand copies would be impressive. Other times you might need a much higher number to be persuasive. After checking out your book on Amazon, your numbers are impressive. You should really try to get an agent to help you place your work with a new publisher. What can a literary agent do for you?Read this and feel fr*ee to post a follow-up question: http://literary-agents.com/best-literary-agent/top-literary-agents/. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  37. B
    83 days ago

    What if I sent a query, with notes on similar and dissimilar books in my genre, and offered 150 pages of my manuscript (nonfiction). No proposal, although not a problem to create… what do you think about this idea? Query + Comparisons + Offer to send 150 pages. A unique way to pitch? Or totally crazy? … your thoughts? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    B Reply:

    What if I added sample chapters with each query I sent? After all, let them read the book. ?? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Query only, although you should have some competitive analysis thoughts or context in the query. No longer than one page. Don’t offer anything extra or add anything extra that they didn’t ask for. If they ask them for something, give them exactly what they ask for. Anything else is a red flag and agents will make assumptions about you that you don’t want them to make. Put all of your wonderful creativity in the book, instead. :) Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    B Reply:

    What assumptions would they make? :) Good article topic

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi B, I was just going to tell you what a great idea that is… that I should write an article about it… then I realized I already did (quite a while back). Here’s a link: http://literary-agents.com/literary-agent-guidelines/. Mark :) | Ask a Literary Agent


  38. B
    91 days ago

    What is the fine line between Memoir and something else…? I’m writing a true story, but some of the scenarios and conversations are a little tweaked. They were all said and done at one point but for the sake of the book and my memory, the order in which these things happened and the way they were said may have been changed. Would this still be considered memoir? Or do I go into another category? And what category would that be? Thanks!

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi B. It’s admittedly a fuzzy line. If you do your best to tell the story as accurately as possible, you can still call it memoir. Agents/publishers/readers understand that you can’t remember every detail and you have to re-imagine it. If you’re nervous about it, you could also call it narrative nonfiction based on true events. Or, you can make it a novel based on true events. I hope this helps. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    B Reply:

    thank you

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  39. Wukelanren
    94 days ago

    I was thinking about our talk that we had in December. Especially about the part when I told you that French publisher was interested in my book that will be released this year. And I thought, does my publisher have to send me the final edited draft of my book? Because, in other case I’ll have to send the original manuscript with mistakes to French publisher. And if I will, what I need to say in the description of the work? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Wukelanren Reply:

    For example: This book was published under the pen name George A. Kos by US publisher and if you’re interested in this work, please contact with (publisher), (email), in order of purchasing the translation rights.
    How do you think, will it be fine for this publisher?
    Of course, I’ll do that after the release of the book. But I don’t know if I have to do that? Or I might have to try?.. :(
    Can you give me some advice about that?
    Thanks,
    Yury

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi again Yury, I don’t remember all the details regarding the French publisher. If I were you, I would contact my publisher and ask them how they prefer to handle it. They will give you a contact person there to mention in your letter. Or they might ask you for the information and contact the other publisher on your behalf. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Yury, make every effort to get a copy of the final edited version. I know an author that lost his publisher after many years… and then decided to self-publish the book. But he didn’t have the edited version and had to spend a great deal of time doing it all over again. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  40. doug
    97 days ago

    Good afternoon Mark.
    My first novel is 200,000 words,an upmarket treatment of college life in the 70′s,a compelling read.
    Naturally,it will never be published as a debut effort.
    This necessitated my second novel of 86,000 words,a man’s view of romance in the 80′s,which will have to suffice as a debut effort.
    I am currently querying the shorter work.When is the opportune time to mention the longer manuscript to an agent? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Doug. That depends on whether you have a third manuscript and, if so, what it’s about. Let me know that and I can give you a better answer. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    doug Reply:

    Mark,thanks for the response.
    Currently pulling together ideas for a third effort(only recently completed revision on #2,and will go through #1 again).
    I do have the confidence to follow up with a #3.
    I began each manuscript with a sketchy outline(basic timeline) and each day my hand merely followed the ink pen(s) across the blank paper.
    Now,if I were retired and didn’t work 50+ hours/week…

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Doug, don’t do it in the query. It’s very long and very different than the shorter work, so it might spook some agents. They also might feel like you’ll try to pressure them to sell it. I would wait until you have an agent (assuming you get one for the shorter work) and then bring it up if/when the agent asks about other works. Just don’t come off as overly attached to getting that agent to shop it, and you’ll be okay. He or she might love it. Just no pressure. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent


  41. saw lian cheah
    108 days ago

    In sending photos in the book proposal, do I caption it on a strip of paper and tape it below the photos or do I caption it on the back of the photos? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Don’t include original photos, scan them into the proposal. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  42. saw lian cheah
    108 days ago

    In the website on Bookends, LLC, it says to inlcude photos, newspaper clippings of interviews etc to showcase your platform in the book proposal. What if I don’t have anything and just a few newspaper articles on my prize winning stories in previous short story contests and some news articles with my byline when I worked for a news agency years ago as a reporter. Do I include them in with the book proposal or do I wait for the agent to request it? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Always best to give agents what they’re asking for, to increase your odds. :) Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  43. saw lian cheah
    108 days ago

    If I have photos coming after a particular chapter, do I need to write that in the summary in that particular chapter in the TOC? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Can’t hurt. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  44. saw lian cheah
    108 days ago

    My chapters don’t have titles so in the TOC chapter summaries, is it okay if there are no titles or do I put titles in the summaries but let it remain titleless in the memoir itself? Do you think titles in a memoir help sell the book? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    You don’t need titles, or you can simply number them. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  45. saw lian cheah
    108 days ago

    Hi Mark

    You said chapter summaries tell the reader the entire chapter. But Michael Larsen in his tips on how to write a book proposal says that each chapter outline in the TOC should cover only the main points. And on Bookends, LLC, the literary agency’s website, it says to make the chapter summaries read like the book itself and not start each chapter with ‘This chapter includes…’ which means it has to be interesting. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Saw Lian. Since the chapter summaries are short, you can only cover the main points. Just make sure you cover the main points. Regarding the other statement, it’s most important that the person reading your summaries understanding what’s happening in each chapter. It’s less important that the summaries read like a novel. Make them as interesting as possible but make sure, first and foremost, that they’re clear. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  46. saw lian cheah
    109 days ago

    Hi Mark

    In the table of contents, for chapter summaries, can I encapsulate the whole chapter by using a paragraph from that chapter but condensed and with a hook at the beginning? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Saw Lian, I so wish that I could say yes. But chapter summaries should be written differently. They should allow the reader to understand exactly what happens in the entire chapter. Step by step. It’s not meant to be interesting reading, or even suspenseful. It needs to be clear, accurate, and comprehensive. I know this isn’t what you want to hear, but I have to be the one to tell you. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  47. Wukelanren
    110 days ago

    Hi, Mark! I have a question for you. Can I send it on your email?

    Thank you
    Yury | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Yury, yes… fire away. You can use my contact form page here. It is private. http://literary-agents.com/contact/ Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  48. Janet Lee Montera
    112 days ago

    Hi Mark, I sent an email to you with a number of updates that I look forward to talking over with you.

    Also, on the copyright question below, can my company hold the copyright? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Janet, I hope you got my email… regarding the copyright question, I’m not sure to be honest with you. I’d probably always prefer to use my own name since that will never change. Companies change, get sold, etc. You never know. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  49. lynn
    140 days ago

    Mark, once again I come to the mountain. What did I do before I found your web sight?
    With you advice, I now have a query letter ready to shoot out the door, but a question ocurred to me today. Should I copyright my manuscript before putting it out there, or does the publisher or agent do it? I am blond, so it is ok for me to ask such questions so far into the game.
    thanks
    lynn | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Lynn, you just made me realize that I need to do an article this… so I just put it on my list. Good topic that I know a lot of authors wonder about. I’m a big believer in doing everything 100% when it comes to those things that are most important to me. And my writing is one of those things. So I would actually file it with the copyright office. Even though your publisher will do it for you. Same thing goes for backing up websites and emails, etc. I have several different types of backups. I’d be a mental case if I lost my data, or if someone copied my books. Take the time and copyright your work. Thanks for always being so kind, and there are no silly or blond questions! :) Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  50. Jim
    140 days ago

    I guess you deleted it. I am tired and I have many screens open. Time for bed. thanks and I will look for your email. | Ask a Literary Agent

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  51. Jim
    140 days ago

    I thought I was sending this to an email–can you please delete my last post?!?!? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Got it… done. No worries. Will reply in a moment by email. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  52. Jim
    140 days ago

    What’s with small publishers like New Horizon Press, AMACOM, or Career Press? I am looking at agents and one has lots of titles with these. Do I need an agent? Granted, I want to get published and my name isn’t Stephen King, but are these good deals? Fly by night? Advances? Worth waiting out something better? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Jim, some authors do better with houses like that than with big houses. All depends on the nature of your book. Amacom, for example, has a huge network and marketing potential for the right books in their niche. So you could potentially sell more with any of these houses than even Random House. A good agent should be able to help you decide. But it would be best to find an agent that’s also sold to the big boys. What’s your book about? Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Jim Reply:

    Thanks. It’s a history of rock music–but with a fresh, in-depth approach (don’t want to give it all away!). | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Jim Reply:

    It’s tough, I am trying to be realistic–and i have the greatest book of all-time. (haha). I certainly want some credibility with a first book and I would like to think that if it is good I would at least have a shot at some positive reviews and some exposure. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hey Jim. I sold a few books in that genre as an agent. The publishers you referenced earlier are probably not the best fit. My Directory of Literary Agents has book agents listed under music in nonfiction. Take a look if you haven’t already: http://literary-agents.com/directory-literary-agents. Then consider setting up an introductory call with me to talk about your query, etc. You can learn more about hat here: http://literary-agents.com/directory-literary-agents. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

    Jim Reply:

    I can’t “Reply” anymore? I have been on this site. I feel pretty good about my query, really but I am willing to talk more. | Ask a Literary Agent

    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hey Jim, just hit one of the reply links above… earlier in this discussion thread. That’s what I just did. I think that will work for you. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

    Jim Reply:

    I get it. I have been using your service and have some bites. I like my query–what else could you do for me or me for you? | Ask a Literary Agent

    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Jim, what do you mean by “service”? My Directory of Literary Agents here at my site? The information on my mp3s and/or articles? Sounds like you’re saying that you used one or more of those things and it might have contributed to some of your success. Or maybe that’s just my wishful thinking. I’d love to know that I was somehow part of your success story. Tell me a little more, then I’ll know what to suggest. I’m just happy for you. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

    Jim Reply:

    I am querying agents from your directory. I looked at some other articles, too, which were good, but mainly the directory. | Ask a Literary Agent

    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hey, that’s still a win and I’ll take it. If you want, send me your query and/or proposal privately here and I’ll tell you if I think I can help you in any way. But it sounds like you’re doing pretty good. I’ll ask you more about your response rate numbers from agents via email. And give you a couple things to think about that you might not have considered… that could make a big difference. Here’s my email page: http://literary-agents.com/contact/. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent


  53. david buckner
    140 days ago

    Is Amanda Urban currently accepting queries? I have read that she is on one post and that she isn’t, on another. Thanks. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi David, that’s one of the few things that I don’t track in my Directory of Literary Agents… because it changes constantly. The only thing you can trust is what an agent says (sort of) on his or her website. Even that can be dead wrong. Although it might be controversial to some, I say… if in doubt, send your query. What do you have to lose? Check out my agent directory for more info here: http://literary-agents.com/directory-literary-agents. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  54. lynn
    141 days ago

    Mark, I know having been a reporter that each profession has its own language, Now I need to ask about the meaning of some literary terms. What does literary and commercial mean? If you have time, some time between midnight and 5:am, you might want to make a dictionary of terms, just a thought.
    Your agent directory is priceless, and to think you did all that work, and offer it to you writing community for free. You are putting success within my grasp, thanks, lynn | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Lynn, I love this question and will be posting definitions online. They can be confusing, even to industry insiders because everyone has slightly different interpretations. That said, here are mine. Literary: More complex sentence structure, usually more flowery/poetic language, challenging vocabulary, and unusual/distinct writing style. Commercial: Appealing to a broad audience, often falling into a clear genre like mystery or romance. And thanx for your kindness. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  55. Prashant P. Degaonkar
    143 days ago

    Hi,

    I have already published my book and holding legal copyrights certificate. Details are on my website. Pl. advise, how to proceed to make it a worldwide project.

    Regards | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Prashant, the best place to start is listening to my fr*ee mp3 that you can learn more about here: http://literary-agents.com. After you listen to that, I recommend that you take advantage of the many instructional articles on my website. In your case, you might to start here: http://literary-agents.com/get-a-literary-agent/. Then post another question on my site so I can help you start applying everything. Of course, signing up for 1-hour introductory phone or Skype call would allow you to do everything more quickly and easily. You can learn more about that here: http://literary-agents.com/book-marketing/book-marketing-coach/. Either way, I look forward to helping you create your success story. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  56. B
    147 days ago

    Hey Mark. Once you sell your 1st 50 pages to the publishing house are they going to hold you to keeping those chapters the way they are? Also, I give an outline of addt’l chapters and then later organize it differently or want to add 30 more pages or subtract 50, are they going to say NO, we want it like how you sold it to us? Thanks! | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi B, awesome question. The short answer is, no. It’s best to stick as much as possible to what you “sell them on” because that’s what they agreed to. But, if you make changes that make the book better, of course they’ll appreciate it. And this is expected to some degree. However, you’re putting yourself in a position that will require you to “sell them” AGAIN on the changes. However, a good agent can help you with this if needed. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    B Reply:

    Thanks Mark! Related to that question, if I have a certain way (generally) that I want my book to be shared with the world (minus editorial & grammar stuff) is it best to write the whole nonfiction book and sell as is (to a certain extent) rather than sell the first 50 pages w/proposal…? Thank you! | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    That’s always better… more likely to sell that way and possibly get you better terms… because there is less risk for the publisher. They don’t have to worry about whether you’re going to finish and/or whether the book is going to be as good as the proposal. However, the obvious down side is that you have to be patient and write the whole book before getting paid anything. :) Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

    B Reply:

    Thanks Mark. Do you have an article talking about the “better” terms you may get if you have a finished product… as it relates to nonfiction (not sure if that makes any difference)
    Thanks | Ask a Literary Agent

    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    The terms vary so widely depending on the particular genre, agent, and publisher… that it’s difficult to suggest a range. I’m guessing you mean advance and royalties? Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    B Reply:

    Oh, okay, I guess that’s what you meant by it :) Potential for a higher advance/payment and better deal with royalties if sold as book already finished… Thanks! | Ask a Literary Agent

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  57. Gary Towner
    151 days ago

    I have a screen play I can’t get anyone to read. I have had published 5 books, so I do know how to write Query letters (and I only contact people who say the are interested in the kind of stories I write). An contests are out—I know the odds. Since I don’t know thec gardeners of power people, what am I to do? Again, I onky ask for reasonable consideration as I know without an agent, my project will never get produced | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Gary, since you’ve ruled out contests, all that’s left is pitching agents, managers, and/or producers in person… or via query letter. You can also try connecting with them on social media but you’ll still need to follow up with a great query letter. By the way, there are many published authors that know how to write query letters… but could still use some help making them better. So be open to getting advice from someone you know that you trust. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  58. Janet Lee Montera
    157 days ago

    So Mark… When is enough, enough? You know, the times an author says: “…ugh, I should have used that word instead of that word. Really! Just one word can then derail the paragraph because to change one word may—no actually does—change many things. So Mark, when is enough, enough? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Janet! Hmm. Good question. Fun question. Okay, here you go. How about… when you simply can’t take it any more… you’re not sure if your changes are making a difference… or, when your spouse says they’re going to divorce you if you don’t just get it done already and stop stinking up the house because of it. Just kidding (sort of). Can you tell that I have experience with this? Working with another writer to get his/her feedback helps. ;) Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  59. Amk
    158 days ago

    Hi Mark,
    I’m not able to find success from two months, what should i do. Self Publish? Lulu and Createspace are Okay?
    How to get attention from agents, how to make them feel you’re amazing?
    Bye | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Amk, sorry to hear that you haven’t gotten the results you want… yet. That said, two months isn’t a long time. And it’s possible that you simply need help with your query. Let me know if you’re interested in 1-on-1 help with that, and take a look at these articles on my site that present some of my thoughts on self publishing: http://literary-agents.com/category/self-publishing-book. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  60. Esther
    159 days ago

    I am sort of a literary fan maybe a-la-Toni Morrison meets Edwidge Danticat and Maya Angelou mixed with Christianity. I wonder what category I fall under and I wonder what agents are looking for I also want to know the pros and cons of self publishing? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Esther, anything Christian… is Christian. So, if it’s literary fiction but also Christian… then it’s Christian literary fiction or Christian fiction that’s somewhat literary. When it comes to the pros and cons of self-publishing, look at these articles that I believe (and hope) you’ll find both insightful and entertaining: http://literary-agents.com/category/self-publishing-book. Let me know, and be sure to post a follow-up question. I’m happy to help. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  61. saw lian cheah
    161 days ago

    Hi Mark,

    When quoting from a letter or reproducing a letter in full in the mss, do I use italics and do I need to use open and close quotation marks? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Saw Lian, when it comes to these kinds of detailed manuscript formatting details… I’m not the best person to ask. I’m also of the opinion that it’s not going to help or hurt you in your quest to get a literary agent and publisher. If you can’t find the answer to a question after doing a bit of searching on Google, that probably means it isn’t an issue that you need to worry about. That said, I admire your effort and willingness to get everything just right. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  62. D.C Garriott
    163 days ago

    How do I become undeniable to agents? Or better yet, get attention from them? My book is amazing and so am I. Why have I had little to no luck getting a book deal?

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi DC, there are two possible suspects… your query and your sample chapters. I usually suggest that authors have someone qualified look at their query letter first. 9 times out of 10 I can help someone improve their response rate. Many authors go years with no requests for partials or fulls. Then we rework the query and… boom. Multiple requests. Plus, it’s a lot easier to make a query better (compared to a book). How many queries have you sent out? Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  63. Sabrena
    181 days ago

    Hi Mark, I just wanted to thank you for the book “Story”. Just skimming through the pages, I can already tell that there’s going to be a phenomenal wealth of information to gain. I’m looking forward to reading this book. Robert McKee offers seminars. Maybe one day I’ll have the privilege of attending. That would be awesome! :)

    Thanks again. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Sabrena, I’m so glad… that book really opened my eyes in many ways. Happy Holidays! Mark

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  64. saw lian cheah
    183 days ago

    If the agency requires only a table of contents, does the agent actually read through the outlines of the more than 100 chapters?

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    They might. If they are interested in what they see at the beginning, they will continue reading. Agents don’t ask for anything that they won’t potentially use. Mark

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  65. saw lian cheah
    183 days ago

    My memoir has more than 100 chapters, 800 pages. It’s not possible to write one to two page synopsis. Can I write a synopsis based on the more interesting chapters and ensuring it flows and limit it to about 15 pages and send it with the Table of Contents? Will the agent reject my mss because the synopsis coverage of chapters doesn’t tally with the number of chapters in my Table of contents. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    It is possible to write a 2-page synopsis, just look at all the back cover copy and flap cover copy on books in bookstores. That is what you are trying to accomplish with your short synopsis. It will provide just a little more detail that what you see on the back of books and on flap copy. Big picture. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  66. saw lian cheah
    183 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Mark

    On your question when as to when my mss is to be finished, I’m doing the second last draft. After this, I’m going to redraft the sixth and final time. After that, I’m going to write my book proposal and start querying.

    In one of your articles, you mentioned that synopsis is required even for non-fiction. What if in the submissions criteria, the agency doesn’t ask for a synopsis for non-fiction but just a Table of Contents, do I still need to send a synopsis? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Saw Lian, always send only what an agent asks for. However, you might mention in your query to this particular agent that you have a synopsis available. Happy Holidays! Mark

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  67. Rahul Abhyankar
    185 days ago

    Hi Mark,
    Is Times New Roman 12pt with double spacing good for my novel? What font should the chapter titles be?

    Rahul | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Rahul Abhyankar Reply:

    I tried out double spacing the novel and it seems a bit weird…or maybe I’m not used to it. Please tell me your opinion. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Rahul, it will take a while to get used to it… just make sure you do it. You will get some rejections on that basis alone if you don’t. Chapters titles should be the same font and size. :) Mark

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    Rahul Abhyankar Reply:

    Shouldn’t the chapter titles be Bold, bigger and different font?

    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    All caps, but don’t worry about these types of details. If agents rejected authors over things like this, no one would get published. And… not every agent/publisher wants everything formatted exactly the same way. Happy Holidays! Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  68. Sabrena
    193 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Mark,
    Glad you’re back! :) Obviously you’re doing great things. I didn’t noticed what the increase will be for the one on one consultation, but it is my goal to schedule with you sometime next month. I was editing my book and placed it to the side to meet the nanawrimo challenge last month. So, now I’m back on track. Hopefully, I’ll stay on track because I have “New Year” goals starting next month. Part of my problem is editing down my word count. Any suggestions? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Sabrena… me, too. It was tough to be away for so long. Much more fun to be here interacting with real people. Especially when they are nice like you. :) By the way, I didn’t say what the increase would be since I’m not sure yet. That’s why you didn’t see anything specific. But you should definitely sign up before the end of this month or the first week or two of the year to be sure you get the current offer before it changes. And… what is your current word count? Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Sabrena Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | My word count is a little over 123,000. Yikes! I’m trying to get it down. :) My challenge is knowing how. I have deleted somethings that I thought I really didn’t need and I’ve reworded some sentences. That has helped me cut out over 2,000 words so far. So, any suggestions would be appreciated. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Sabrena, the only thing I can say in 500 characters or less… is that the book “Story” should help. I assure you it’s going to help you immensely. Let me know what you think, have a wonderful weekend, and keep me posted! Mark | Ask a Literary Agent


  69. Wukelanren
    194 days ago

    Thank you, Mark! This is a traditional publisher, but they offer me only an ebook contract, because I’m not from US or Canada and they don’t take authors from outside of US at this time. I’m sorry but I’m not able to call you. I’m waiting for revised contract from this publisher now. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hey Yury! I don’t think you got the last private email that I sent you… let me know. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  70. JM
    195 days ago

    Hi Mark, do all agents use contracts with writers? Is it normal to just have an oral agreement? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi JM, I’ve actually written a few articles about this. Click here to check them out: http://literary-agents.com/hiring-a-literary-agent/literary-agent-agreement. Then come back here to let me know what you think and ask me a follow-up question: http://literary-agents.com/ask-a-literary-agent. I’m happy to help. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  71. Alexandra Hillcoat
    196 days ago

    Hey Mark, sorry to bother you again, but I have another question.
    In my manuscript I often switch POV in the middle of a chapter. I’ve read in some places that I shouldn’t do that because it can confuse the reader. The sources weren’t very reliable (things like yahoo ask) so I want your opinion if you’re willing to give it: Should I edit it so that it’s a new chapter every time I switch POV? It’s just that the chapters might be really short if I do. Thanks, once again I’m sorry to bother you. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Alexandra, no trouble at all… however I’m not the best person to answer this question. I suggest you post it on my friend Robin Hoffman’s site. She has a page just like this set up on her website here: http://getpublishedcoach.com/ask-robin. Just do me a favor and come back to here to post an update for the benefit of everyone else reading this post. ;) Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Alexandra Hillcoat Reply:

    Will do! Thanks | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Rahul Abhyankar Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Alexandra, Try reading “Kane Chronicles” by Rick Riodan. It’s been written by two people’s point of view. Rick has given it a very different POV: that of a listener. The book has been written as the script of a recording which the protagonist sends to Rick Riordan. So basically it’s the script of many people talking to the camera. And it works more than fine! Rahul | Ask a Literary Agent


  72. Rahul Abhyankar
    197 days ago

    Hi Mark,
    Suppose I get my manuscript edited from a professional, and then some literary agent likes it. They offer to edit it. I agree, submit my manuscript. What if the new editor has opinions different from the older one? And after my book is published, whom should I give the credit of editing to?

    Rahul | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Always focus on the immediate task. Right now you simply need to improve the book as much as possible, without knowing what agents are going to think about your work. So you have to focus on that now. If an agent later wants to discuss additional changes, you can work through that then. Same thing goes with your publisher. You can credit all of them on your acknowledgements page when you are published. ;) Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  73. Rahul Abhyankar
    197 days ago

    Hi Mark,
    Would it be a good idea to get the book edited before I submit it to literary agents? Do you know any good ones?

    Rahul | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Always. First, try to connect with a good local writers’ group. That will save you money and give your more perspective. Second, hire an editor to ONLY provide an overall critique… big picture stuff that a smart writer can then apply throughout the book like story improvements, etc. Third, hire someone to do a final line edit to help fix any final mistakes including spelling, grammar, etc. We will be starting to offer these services in-house soon. :) Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  74. Scott
    197 days ago

    Hi Mark, I self-published my first science-fiction novel as a POD. I just completed my second novel and it is a SEQUEL. An author I know suggested I get someone interested in the second one on its own merits before mentioning the first. I’d like to find a more traditional publisher for both books, and was assuming that because I was trying to sell both that an agent was the only way to go. Do you think that’s correct? Thanks! | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hey Scott, (had to shorten your question due to my new new website platform – sorry). The suggestion you got from that author is a good one, if book two works as a standalone. An agent is always the best way to go if you want a traditional publisher. Check out this article: http://literary-agents.com/guide-to-literary-agents/do-you-need-a-literary-agent. And consider setting up a call with me here: http://literary-agents.com/book-marketing/book-marketing-coach. Keep me posted. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  75. Emily
    197 days ago

    HI Mark, I am half way through my novel and am really wanting to submit it to a literary agent to 1. See if it is a concept and style which will be a hit and 2. Hopefully get some advice for certain parts of the second part as some mentoring would give me some momentum. Is this something agents are prone to do? Accept unfinished manuscripts and help develop the piece more? Thanks Mark. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Emily! Agents will sometimes help you improve your manuscript, but it has to already be great. The things they ask you to change will probably be things that you don’t even see are problems at the moment. My suggestion would be to hire a freelance editor if you’re able to do so. At the very least, consider signing up for a 1-hour consulting call to discuss everything. You can learn more about what I do on these calls here: http://literary-agents.com/book-marketing/book-marketing-coach. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  76. Nicholas
    197 days ago

    I’ve worked desperately to come up with the “perfect” query with only a couple of REALLY promising responses, yet after all this effort I remain unrepresented… and fairly frustrated. Accidentally stumbling upon your presentation has compelled me to pause for thoughtful consideration. Your responses/advice to others sounds good; your background also gives me a point of reference for you. Keep up the good work and thanks for helping us! | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Nicholas, happy to help. Just keep at it and don’t give up. I just posted a LOT of knew articles on my site that might help. Click here to take a look: http://literary-agents.com/get-a-literary-agent. Sounds like your query letter needs improvement. Consider signing up for an introductory 1-on-1 coaching call with me here to discuss it, if you’re able to do so: http://literary-agents.com/book-marketing/book-marketing-coach. Of course, you can also post another question for me here. :) Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  77. Angela Cosco
    197 days ago

    I’ve tried over a hundred agents. It seems that they do NOT READ MY MATERIAL AT ALL! My novel is sure to be as good as Twilight or better. Why would agents not listen if I mention things like this? The agents answer so quickly, I know none of them have had the time to read the first three chapters I submitted to them. ”WHY?” WHAT ELSE CAN I DO??? Do you know of an agent who would be willing to look over my work and give me a real evaluation? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Angela, sorry to hear that (by the way, had to edit your comment for length when I moved my new website so don’t take offense). If you aren’t getting the response you want, it can only be your query or your book. I don’t recommend specific agents but you can access my Literary Agent Directory here (no cost): http://literary-agents.com/directory-literary-agents. You can also sign up for an intro call with me here: http://literary-agents.com/book-marketing/book-marketing-coach. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  78. Wukelanren
    197 days ago

    Hi Mark! In March I have received an offer for contract from an E-book publisher for my first novel, but I rejected it. And now, after not having found an agent or publisher for this novel, I thought of re-submitting this work to this e-book publisher. How do you think, will it be fine to submit this novel again to the publisher which contract I have rejected? But the problem is, what will I tell to this publisher? I’m in despair… :( | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Yury, all you can do is go back to them with honesty and humility. You have nothing to lose. Although I still suggest you send out more queries to other publishers instead, until you’ve exhausted every possible avenue. Keep me posted. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Wukelanren Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Mark! I’ve got an offer from a publisher for my first book. They sent a contract to me in which I’ve found some mistakes and questions. Then I’ve sent them 2 letters in which I asked them to confirm if they received any of my letters. But the publisher keeps silent for more then 10 days. Is it fine, if I’ve sent them letters worrying if they received any of them? Do you think they can change their mind and call back their contract offer? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Congratulations! Is it from the ebook publisher or someone else (print edition)? It’s difficult to know if your letters created a problem or the publisher is just busy. Now would be a very good time to set up a phone call with me (if you’re able) to make sure you handle this properly. I will let you send me the contract and your correspondence so we can discuss it in greater detail. Here is the link: http://literary-agents.com/book-marketing/book-marketing-coach. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent


  79. Erica Verrillo
    197 days ago

    I have NEVER gotten an agent or a publisher by writing a query letter. So, why (and here’s the question) are we all wasting our time on a pitch? In my experience, the only way to get an agent is to receive one for Christmas, from another agent – or – to get drunk with one at one of those infernal “pitching” conferences, which, as you know, agents absolutely dread… Seriously, Mark. You’ve been there. You know how it works. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Erica, had to shorten your comment for length due to moving my website with a new comment system. So plz don’t take offense. I’ve gotten lots of authors agents and publishers by writing a query letter. When I was an agent, that’s also how 95% of my clients got me to represent them. The other 2%? Referrals and writers’ conferences. And my favorite thing in the world to do as an agent was sit through pitches. Seriously. Granted, that’s rare. But I’m not the only one. ;) Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  80. Alexandra Hillcoat
    197 days ago

    How many words should a thriller/romance novel be? What do you think is too short and what is too long? Also, when I asked a friend of my mom’s who’s a published author if she would read over the first two chapters of my manuscript and give me advice, she told me she wouldn’t because I’m only 13. Would being that young make agents not even read the parts of my manuscript I send them? If yes, then how could I get them to read it? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Alexandra, first of all… shame on the “friend” of your mom that wouldn’t at least look at something and give you some direction and/or encouragement! I’m glad you found me. Click here to check out this article: http://literary-agents.com/young-authors. Then leave me a comment to let me know what you think. Regarding word count, it’s more important if you’re an unpublished author. Shoot for 70-100,000 words as a start. And keep writing. :) Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  81. Peter Lau
    197 days ago

    I have created a new animated cartoon series and i am looking for an agent to represent me to help me get my series to “air”. I have written the series but it has not been animated. Who do you think i should be searching for as an agent. I’m completely stumped but my cartoon is fantastic and i really need someone to have a look at it and see its full potential. Many thanks in advance for your help Mark. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Peter, are we talking about comic books (short) or graphic novels (60-120 pages)? I can steer you in the right direction to find literary agents interested in graphic novels, but not comic books. Just let me know. Mark P.S – Just converted my website to a new platform so I had to shorten your original question/comment. :) | Ask a Literary Agent

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  82. Anya
    197 days ago

    Hello, Is it possible that a literary agent would ever work with someone under the age of 15 in which to find a publisher to publish their book? Thanks. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hi Anya, believe it or not… I wrote an article just for you. Well, not exactly. But sort of. Click here to check it out: http://literary-agents.com/young-authors. Then leave me a comment to let me know what you think! Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  83. Cheryl
    197 days ago

    Mark, I’m a published author of nonfiction but I’m trying to peddle my novel to agents. I’ve had several ask to see the full manuscript or partials. Is this just standard or should I read into this that at least the query is successful? And when an agent asks to see the full, do they really read and are they serious or they are just going through the motions? Thanks. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Cheryl, a 40% positive response rate of agents asking to see sample chapters and/or your manuscript would be excellent. 10-20% would be very good. When an agent asks for a full, they are very serious. I can’t give you a percentage on the number of full manuscripts that result in representation, however. That really depends on the agent. If you want, send me your query via email here: http://literary-agents.com/contact. Sounds like you did good. I’d love to see it. Mark :) | Ask a Literary Agent

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  84. Brian Holliday
    197 days ago

    In the last three years I have written three books, none of which have been submitted to anyone as yet. I am still trying to step gingerly through the minefield of publishing but after three years I am no nearer either an agent or a suitable publisher. I have found through blogs etc that publishers are very much up their own and there should be a fairer way of submitting. The information on your website about Writing Scams I found invaluable. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Brian, hang in there… and keep going through the information on my new website. I’ve added a LOT of new articles. Also, if you have the means to do so, seriously consider signing up for an introductory consulting session before pitching your work to anyone. Here is more info: http://literary-agents.com/book-marketing/book-marketing-coach. Of course you can post more questions here as well. Either way, I’m happy to help. Keep me posted. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    brian holliday Reply:

    Thanks Mark,
    I will look into a consultancy session; thanks for the reply – I’m glad there’s someone out there that understands the publishing world. My guess is that there are hundreds of people like myself trying to get published but sadly the rest of us will never read their work because of the fierce publishing filter. It seems that most manuscripts are doomed before they get on the editors desk and quite frankly I didn’t spend months writing to end up in a slushpile.
    Many Thanks
    Brian | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Brian, that’s true… about the competition. The good news (for you) is that most authors don’t have a CLUE how to position themselves and their work in the best way. Use all the fr*ee resources on my site and you’ll have a much better chance of getting agents interested. Schedule an introductory consulting call with me and you’ll have an even greater chance. Education and having someone help you see what you can’t see alone is huge. Looking forward to learning more about you and your work. | Ask a Literary Agent


  85. Gary Towner
    197 days ago

    I don’t want to seem disrespectful, but how can a novel writer ever expect to get an agent to represent his works if all agents look at queries looking for reasons to reject them instead of looking for reasons they can promote the novel? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Gary, I understand. Agents face the same dilemma when they are pitching publishers. It’s not a negative. The competition is fierce. As a publishing insider here on my site, you knowing that simple fact is half the battle. Most authors don’t have a clue and don’t take the submission process seriously enough. Do what I do, and encourage my 1-on-1 coaching clients to do… which is all that you can to create the absolute best pitch possible. Use every resource on this website. All my best. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  86. B
    198 days ago

    Sorry for another question! Years ago I got a lot of press but haven’t had a lot for several yrs. One agent told me to get more. To start it up again.I will do press if it comes but don’t want to exhaust myself to get it. I follow the flow of the Universe. I know that’s not publishing talk :) Is it MY responsibility in how to “sell” my NOT having press for some yrs or the agents selling skills to come up with a response? How would one explain this & still sell big? THANKS! | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi B, I don’t mind the questions. :) There are many ways to improve your platform. Current press is just one of them. By the way… it’s always up to the author to try and eliminate any “red flags” or “weaknesses” in a pitch. Give agents a good rationale why you’ve been out of the press as a starting point, to improve your chances. Oh, about the Universe… my two cents. Although you should follow the flow of the Universe. It will follow yours as well. Commit to what you want and go for it. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  87. B
    198 days ago

    A bit hesitant here…. want to be a good “shopper” I have 2 agents I’m considering. One more than the other. How do I know they are a good salesperson? That they’ll have a good sales pitch & twist in selling me? Our call was fast, rushed & asking ME questions. How do u get over the nerves & just go for it, sign the contract & trust? Dont want to be tied into a contract with a “bad” fit agent. I got into the zone of selling myself instead of interviewing them. New writer issues :) Thoughts? :/ | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Congrats! You have to tell me if you used any of my strategies (from my mp3s or on this website) to help you improve your query letter. That would make me VERY happy. To answer your question, look at the new articles I posted recently here: http://literary-agents.com/hiring-a-literary-agent/how-to-choose-a-literary-agent. That will help. You can also set up a call with me to help you decide: http://literary-agents.com/book-marketing/book-marketing-coach. Let me know how it goes. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  88. Rahul Abhyankar
    200 days ago

    Hi Mark,
    I’m really confused while writing a one page synopsis of each of the six books in my series. How do I write it? I keep missing important details and if I add them, it goes more than a page.

    Rahul | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Rahul, you can find some of my best tips on this topic here: http://literary-agents.com/get-a-literary-agent/synopsis-for-literary-agents. Personally, I find the process of writing a query letter MUCH easier than writing a book synopsis… especially for fiction. Good luck, and keep me posted. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  89. Ashanee C.
    202 days ago

    Hey Mark :)

    Okay, straight to the question…
    We draft a query and after the information we receive (on silly websites),
    We email them to our top choices for literary agents,
    Agents we literally dream about.
    They then reject.

    Then we meet someone who actually knows what they’re talking about (M-A-R-K), and we finally make the right query, except, we just blew our chances with the agents we truly adored.

    Is there a period of time you should wait before emailing them with your new and improved query letter? Is that not accepted in the world of agents, and should we forget about it and move on?

    Thanks for reading! | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Ashanee, great question and good humor. The answer is, it depends. When someone works with me to improve their query, they can resubmit it to the same agents the next day. The query will be so different that agents 9 times out of 10 won’t recognize it. Sometimes I recommend changing a title, however. If someone isn’t working with me, their best bet is to wait 3-6 months and try to “reinvent” the query as much as possible before resubmitting. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  90. Rahul Abhyankar
    218 days ago

    Hi Mark, If I have to mention “Officer xyz” or “Commander abc” in my novel and I haven’t mentioned the names “xyz” or “abc” to the readers yet, then do I refer to them as “the Officer” and “the Commander”? Or just “Officer” and “Commander” | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Rahul, good hearing from you and sorry it took a while for me to reply. Just got back from a trip and, as you know, I’ve been putting a lot of my time into getting my new website done. Regarding your question, I would defer to Robin’s reply on this one. I think you can go either way, depending on the context. Keep me posted on your progress. :) Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Rahul Abhyankar Reply:

    Hi Mark,
    Thanks.
    You’re getting a new website? What’s it about? Could you give me the link?
    Rahul | Ask a Literary Agent

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  91. cheah saw lian
    226 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Mark, What is the Chicago Manual of Style for a quotation within a narrative e.g. Farmer James wanted to tell his wayward son the proverb Make hay while the sun shines to make him realize he should make good use of his life. Do I italicize the proverb or put it in quotation marks? Couldn’t get the information I needed on the website you recommended and it wasn’t in Your Dictionary website either. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Saw Lian, I would use quotation marks. Sorry I was so slow to respond. Been busy traveling and getting my new website done! Hope you are well. When is your mss going to be done? When are going to start sending out queries??? Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  92. cheah saw lian
    242 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Mark, When I quote someone or write a quote from a book, do I italicize the quote or do I put it in inverted commas? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Saw Lian, take a look at this article… I think it will answer your question and possibly some others that you might have: http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/single-quotes-versus-double-quotes.aspx. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  93. JM
    244 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Mark. Love your website! I know several bestselling authors that I could ask for an endorsement for my book. How do I chose which is the best one to ask? I know someone might say the one with the most FB fans, but I feel pulled to ask the one who I love the most (& is not the most promo savy).Is this a bad marketing? Also I don’t think my followers know this person, whats the point of an endorsement anyway? I dont think any of the authors would promote me anyway, what’s the pros to them? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Thank you for the kind words JM. Do you already have a literary agent? How/when you get testimonials should partly be affected by that. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  94. cheah saw lian
    246 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Are you still writing your weekly articles as I haven’t been receiving any in my inbox? If you’re posting them on a website every week, let me know the link. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Saw Lian, I’m putting all my extra time/energy into getting my new site done. I’m not sending out emails at the moment but you can see a lot of the new content here: http://literary-agents.com. Just mouse over the items on the nav bar to see all the new articles. Once I’m done with the website, I’ll be sending out regular emails again. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  95. cheah saw lian
    246 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | In Eat, Pray, Love, I noticed the author had started each new chapter on the last page of the previous chapter and the book has 107 chapters. I was wondering whether it’s okay to do the same for my memoir which has more than 100 chapters and whether the agent will reject it. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Saw Lian, either way is fine. You seem like a very detail oriented person and I trust that your writing is good. That’s the most important thing. Good agents won’t reject you over a simple formatting issue. All my best. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  96. LR
    248 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Mark, Thanks to the useful guidance on your site, I’ve spent quite a bit of time reworking my query letter and it’s now totally different (and far more engaging) than the earlier one I sent out. Is it poor form to submit a new query to an agent that said no (or didn’t respond) previously? Thanks, LR | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | I like the sound of that, and thanks for the positive feedback. It’s not poor form if the query is radically different from the first one, to the point that many/most agents won’t even recognize it. I do this often with my 1-on-1 coaching clients, the letters I help them produce are so different that it’s not an issue. By the way, if you’re able to do so, you should schedule a call with me to talk about your query before sending it out (or sending out more). Info here: http://literary-agents.com/book-marketing/book-marketing-coach. Either way, I’m glad to know that your current query is better than it was. :) Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  97. Rahul Abhyankar
    254 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Mark, This Sunday I read all of your blogs twice. It’s showing unbelievable effects! I made a lot of changes in my query letter and sent it to 10 agents. I really cannot believe that 4/5 agents who replied wanted to see my manuscript. Thanks a lot! You’re definitely guiding me and others on this website on the right path. :D Rahul | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Rahul, I’m delighted to hear it. As you can see I’ve been adding a LOT of new content to my website. If you don’t mind, send me your query letter using the email form on this page when you have a moment: http://literary-agents.com/contact. I’m curious to see how you applied all of the suggestions. Sounds like you did a very good job. All my best. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Rahul Abhyankar Reply:

    Hi Mark,
    It’s the very same letter I sent you some weeks ago.

    Rahul | Ask a Literary Agent

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  98. cheah saw lian
    264 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Mark, One of the tips Michael Larsen gives for book proposals for non-fiction is that in the table of contents, each line in a chapter outline must represent one page of the chapter which means ten lines equals ten pages. Do I follow this tip? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Saw Lian, that’s not bad advice… as a guideline… but you certainly don’t have be that specific. Good hearing from you, enjoy your Sunday. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  99. Sabrena
    266 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Mark, This question is really to anyone who knows :) So, I have always done my writings in Microsoft Works to which few people use, I guess. I changed my novel over to Microsoft Word because I haven’t seen an editor thus far who uses Works. It added over 30 more pages to my novel and it changed the format somewhat. What I want to know is how do I make the format 30 pages smaller without chopping my story? I’ve used Word for letters and term papers, but not totally familiar with it. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Sabrena, your best bet might be to Google “convert works to word” to find tips on this. In my experience, the conversion process is better than nothing but it still requires a lot of manual, tedious smoothing things out. I’m not sure you’ll be able to find one quick fix setting that will do what you need. But Google searches are always my first thought when I run into these types of situations. If you find something good, please post it here for me and everyone else. Tx, and good luck! Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  100. Rahul Abhyankar
    268 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Mark, Just wanted to thank you for http://literary-agents.com/self-publish-a-book That blog helps me to retain my confidence when my publishing journey never seems to end. It always fills me with hope. Thanks a lot. :) Rahul | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Yes Rahul, based on the positive responses that you’ve already gotten from agents and publishers… you should be taking your work more seriously. It might take a while but have a good chance of getting a traditional publisher if you’re persistent. I’m happy to know that I was able to give you that reminder. Keep believing, and keep us all posted on your progress. Your passion gives others strength and hope as well. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  101. Rahul Abhyankar
    268 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Mark, I just rejected an e-book offer from a major e-book publisher. Why? Oh yes, it’s my dream to see my book published, no doubt about that. But it’s my dream to see my published book in a BOOKSTORE. I hate to say but e-book are killing traditional publishing. It’s destroying the “tradition” of flipping pages with fingers, not swishing pages by finger. It’s destroying the scent of new books, the quotes on bookmarks, the attractive spine of a book…it’s destroying all the fun! Rahul | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Rahul, this is probably a good decision… unless it turns out to be the only offer that you receive. But based on everything you’ve told me so far about the reception you’ve been receiving, it sounds like you will have more prospects soon. However, I think you made a good decision because the publisher who is willing to invest the money (more) needed to put your book in print, is also more likely to spend the money needed to PROMOTE your book properly as well. All good things. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  102. Rahul Abhyankar
    269 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Mark, Recently, while filling a submission form on a website, there was a box titled “Exclusive”. What is it for? Do I tick it? Rahul | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Rahul, that means you are ONLY submitting your query to that particular agent… and you’re going to wait until they accept or reject your work before you send additional queries for the same project to other agents. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  103. Djilali
    271 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | I am an ex international fashion model that had children with 2 public personality that each had company that sold for about to 100 million dollars. I lived the life of the elites and I feels ready now to tell my story to the world. I am not a professional writer and I am willing to let some one write my story for me. How to proceed? Thanks you in advanced for any help you could provide. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Djilali, The next steps you should take will depend on your story… seems like you might have the potential for an interesting book/movie… but it is hard to know without more info. The second factor is your financial resources. Since you’re not a writer yourself, you’re going to need someone to help you write the book, or write it mostly for you. If you want to know exactly what type of potential your story has, and find out what kind of options you have when it comes to hiring someone to help you write and sell your story… set up a one-hour consultation with me here: http://literary-agents.com/book-marketing/book-marketing-coach. I will ask you for a lot more information before our call, then tell you exactly what you should do next. Like I said, it will depend on your story and the resources you’re able to invest in the project (time and money). All my best, Mark | ASK A LITERARY AGENT

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  104. Sabrena
    271 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Mark, It’s funny that you suggested joining a writer’s group to assist with critique. I just read that like a couple of hours prior to your email. So, thanks for the suggestion! :) I have seen some in nearby areas. Looking forward to joining one or two. | ASK A LITERARY AGENT

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  105. Anonymous
    274 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | I am a six times published novelist, although I do not, currently have a literary agent. Since I became a writer, I have encountered several publishers who offer no renewal option in their publishing contracts. This means that, once you’ve signed your work over to them, they’ve got it forever, and the author has no say in the matter. I have never signed one of these, but are such agreements normal? Or are they some kind of control game? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | This varies by publisher and also by country. In the United States most publishers get your work forever. The contracts I’ve seen with time limits are generally for American books that have been licensed to another publisher abroad. Great question. Mark | ASK A LITERARY AGENT

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Hey “Anonymous” …I’m online and just wanted to send you a quick note to tell you that I finished your novel this morning. Hot stuff. ;) But that’s your genre, isn’t it. Just kidding. You’re a good writer in multiple genres, as you already know. Wishing you well and just wanted to make sure you know that I’m renewing my membership in your fan club. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  106. Rahul Abhyankar
    274 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Mark, Just curious…which are your favorite fiction/non fiction books? Rahul | ASK A LITERARY AGENT

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | My favorite novel is Ayn Rand’s “The Fountainhead” because I read it in college and related in some ways with the main character Howard Roark… and also some of the author’s philosophy on creativity, relationships, and success. Nonfiction is more difficult and I can’t say that I have a favorite, although I do have a soft spot for Anthony Robbin’s classic bestseller “Unlimited Power” which was a gift that I read when I was 16. Also changed my life. Thanx for asking. Mark | ASK A LITERARY AGENT

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    Rahul Abhyankar Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Mark, Do you like reading fantasy? Which are your favorites? Rahul | ASK A LITERARY AGENT

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Rahul, I like fantasy but don’t have anything that I can say is my favorite. Mark | ASK A LITERARY AGENT


  107. Rahul Abhyankar
    275 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Mark. Recently an agency called the Gilbert Literary Agency accepted to represent my work. What do you think of them? What would you do if you were in my place? Rahul | ASK A LITERARY AGENT

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Rahul, I don’t provide agents reviews or recommendations online. I even don’t do that with my 1-on-1 coaching clients… although I do help them see the pros/cons of different types of agents. The agent selection process is very individual. You might find this new series of articles helpful when making your decision: htttp://literary-agents.com/finding-a-literary-agent. Let me know. Mark | ASK A LITERARY AGENT

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  108. David Emil Henderson
    275 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Mark, I have two novels at Amazon, iTunes, B&N and elsewhere, in paperback and eBook editions, under my Pine Tree Arts imprint. Based on reader reviews, I think one of them is worth promoting to a hard-cover edition. It’s the culmination of a 45-year background in journalism and 10 years in Montana. If you happen to know an agent who might be interested in brokering this effort, here’s a link to “Montana Midnight”: http://www.amazon.com/Montana-Midnight-David-Emil-Henderson/dp/0615473016 Thanks | ASK A LITERARY AGENT

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi David, I don’t make specific agent referrals/recommendations… even to my 1-on-1 coaching clients…. the agent selection process is very individual. But I did just post a series of articles that might help you decide which agents are best for you: http://literary-agents.com/finding-a-literary-agent. As you get farther along, please don’t hesitate to post a follow-up question with more specifics. I’m happy to help in any way I can. All my best. Mark | ASK A LITERARY AGENT

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    David Emil Henderson Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Thanks, Mark. I’ll check your articles. I’ve been through the agent process before, and I have been represented by two of them. But that was years ago, before emails, when authors were told to query only one agent at a time and wait weeks or months for a reply. I wasted so much time on that process that my work became outdated. It’s only now that it has achieved historical timelessness. Your efforts are refreshing. Best wishes for success. DEH | ASK A LITERARY AGENT

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Thank you for your kindness, David. Based on your last post you should consider taking advantage of my introductory consultation call that I have available right now: http://literary-agents.com/book-marketing/book-marketing-coach. If you’ve had agents in the past, but you’re not accomplishing what you want right now, I can definitely help. I just helped another author in a similar situation get a new agent (signed yesterday). Hope the articles are helpful. Mark | ASK A LITERARY AGENT


  109. Rahul Abhyankar
    275 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Mark, one of the agents I queried replied, “Your plot development shows promise. Perhaps, at a later date, when you have some other manuscript or choose to redo the current one… And aslo send us synopses of all six, we can see where your stories are going and whether they have the potential for a 6 book series.” My major question is: Should I send them the synopses of ALL the six books? Because there are some pretty MAJOR twists in the end. Is it necessary for the author to reveal the ending of the series to the publisher? Rahul | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Rahul, if an agent/publisher wants more info about your series… I don’t see a way around sharing it if you want them to consider making you an offer. If you’re worried about your ideas getting stolen, that rarely happens. If you’re simply worried about spoiling the ending, don’t be. Agents/publishers need to know what you have. Also, in the future, please limit your questions to one per post (note how I consolidated your multiple posts into one here). Best, Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  110. Rahul Abhyankar
    277 days ago

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Mark, How exactly do editors edit? What’s the procedure? What’s the technique? Rahul | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Rahul, are you talking about an editor at a publishing house? Or a freelance editor that you would hire to improve your work? Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Rahul Abhyankar Reply:

    Both | ASK A LITERARY AGENT

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Rahul, agents (and editors at publishing houses) will do some editing with you. Your agent will usually do less, but not always. And they both do this for no charge, sometimes going back and forth several times (multiple reviews/revisions). Hiring a professional freelance editor, on the other hand, requires you to pay and you have to be careful to get someone who is qualified and the right fit. They’re also less likely to do multiple reviews/revisions. Mark | ASK A LITERARY AGENT


  111. cheah saw lian
    281 days ago

    How many pages can a chapter in a fiction and non-fiction have before it’s considered too long by the agent? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | That depends. But, if you’re wondering if your chapters are too long, there’s a good chance that they are. Every genre is different, so I suggest you look at books in your category that have already been published to see what’s typical. Your first book isn’t the best time to try to do too many things that are unconventional, at least when it comes to format! Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  112. cheah saw lian
    281 days ago

    In the book How to write a book proposal, it say to write 25 sixty character lines about 250 words per page. Do I need to stick strictly to this guideline? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Not important but it’s a good guideline. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  113. cheah saw lian
    281 days ago

    When writing the Author’s Bio, do I need to put in the year for the relevant employment just like a job resume or do I just write some lines on my relevant experiences to my writing? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    The latter. :) Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  114. cheah saw lian
    281 days ago

    Hi Mark, One tip given by Michael Larsen in his How to Write A Book Proposal was that to look more professional, we could put the proposal in the right pocket of a folder while the sample chapters, illustrations etc go into the left. I couldn’t find this type of folder and bought one folder with a buttoned cover for the proposal and a separate slip in folder where I could just slip in the sample chapters etc. Is this type of folder okay? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Doesn’t make any difference. Just make sure, if you use a folder, that the papers are loose and not bound in any ways… so agents can easily make photocopies for other readers in their office, etc. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  115. cheah saw lian
    289 days ago

    I thought of having photographs in my memoir. I’d just like to know whether the presence of photos in a memoir will enhance its sales. | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Always. :) Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  116. cheah saw lian
    289 days ago

    Supposing you already have an agent for your first book, do you still need to write a book proposal with an Overview, author’s bio etc. and chapter outlines for each subsequent manuscript whether fiction or non-fiction each time or do you just hand over a few sample chapters and the Table of Contents (non-fiction) or a synopsis (fiction) to your agent instead of a full formal book proposal? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Good question. I would say yes although there could be a rare situation when you wouldn’t need it. But don’t plan on that. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  117. cheah saw lian
    289 days ago

    If an agent requests for your non-fiction book proposal and you have photographs meant for the memoir, do you send the photos together with the book proposal? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Include some of the better ones as a sample if you have a lot of them. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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  118. cheah saw lian
    289 days ago

    Hi Mark, I was looking for you answers to my previous question on font sizes for book proposals in my email as you used to send your replies to my email but couldn’t find it. Is it a new policy of yours that you no longer send replies to email inboxes? Also, I remember you mentioned that your Literary Agent Directory will be posted online. Can you tell me the website for it? Also, must each page of a book proposal contain twenty five lines each and do I need to use indentations for the Overview, Author Bio etc (introduction) even though it’s double-spaced? | Ask a Literary Agent

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    Mark Malatesta, Literary Agent Undercover Reply:

    Ask a Literary Agent | Hi Saw LIan, you can find old questions/answers on the old site for now: http://literary-agents.com/ask-a-literary-agent/. I’m still responding to questions and you should get the answers via email. You can access my Directory of Literary Agents here: http://literary-agents.com/directory-literary-agents. The amount of lines per page in a proposal isn’t important. Indent your paragraphs in a section after the first one. Mark | Ask a Literary Agent

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