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Literary Agent Query Letter Example – Book Agents



Literary Agent Query Letter Example Literary agent query letter example (below) will help you improve your pitch to book agents. This article is part of a 17-part series called The Best Way to Get a Literary Agent. The sample query below resulted in a hardcover/paperback book deal for Carol Plum-Ucci, author of The Body of Christopher Creed (Harcourt).

But that’s just the beginning…

This literary agent query letter example was
ultimately responsible for changing Carol’s life completely.

Carol now has seven books in print with Harcourt.

Literary Agency Query Letter Example Novels

She’s been nominated for and/or won
dozens of book awards.

Literary Agency Query Letter Example Edgar Awards

Literary Agency Query Letter Example Printz Award

Her novels have been adapted
into audio books.

Literary Agency Query Letter Example Audio

And her work has been optioned
for feature film (DreamWorks).

Literary Agency Query Letter Example DreamWorks

And…

You can trace everything back to the literary agent query letter example below (although I can probably take some credit too, since I’m the book agent that helped make it all happen). Oh, here are two more reasons you should study this letter:

  1. Carol’s pitch letter was so good that I called her after reading the second paragraph to request an exclusive read of the complete manuscript
  2. This pitch letter was so good that it was published in the Writer’s Digest Books Guide to Literary Agents as a literary agent query letter example for authors to model

After you read Carol’s literary agent query letter example (below), make sure you read my comments underneath it… explaining why I felt it was so powerful. These thoughts were also published in the Writer’s Digest Books Guide to Literary Agents.

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Literary Agent Query Letter Example
by Carol Plum-Ucci

Literary Agency Query Letter Example Carol

Dear Mr. Malatesta:

Of all the agents listed in Jeff Herman’s Guide to Book Publishers, Editors, and Literary Agents, you seemed the nicest! (Or maybe it’s just one of the other entries I saw. “Impatient, illiterate, ignorant writers I do not allow… Remember, I’m selective and cranky!” Gee, I think I’ll sign right up.)

Several reasons I feel I have a winning YA in The Body of Christopher Creed:

  • The Young Adult Market has been shrinking downward in reading level. Initially designed to market to high school students 14-17, the age bracket has dropped to junior high, with probably sophomores at the highest. Not many contemporary works have endured for the high school upper classman. I feel I have created a work that cuts with that unusual double-edged sword—would appeal to the lost age group of high school students and also has enough social redeeming value to appeal to teachers, librarians, editors.
  • While containing marketable mystiques including horror and some romance, its most redeeming qualities are the characters and the voices they yield. It hits on some contemporary issues, i.e. sexual promiscuity and discovering wayward behavior in parents. But this ms is different from other YA’s in that its essential purpose is not to examine issues and moralize (from which older teens shy away). I am simply telling a story—uncovering a mystery—with real life as a steely backdrop.
  • My bone of contention with much young adult fiction is that many stories are all character, and the plot goes nowhere. Not the case here. I went to great lengths to make sure the unfolding drama turned the pages as well as the voice. Teenagers who enjoy King, Straub, Clark would find this an easy but absorbing read—about their own age group.

My full-time position is Director of Publications for the Miss America Scholarship Foundation. I write all their publications, ghost write for Miss America, have written Miss America preliminary stage scripts. I have sold two plays, and The Body of Christopher Creed is my fifth young adult novel (I’ve hit VERY close). I have been a spokesperson for the smuggling of black market literature into former communist countries. I would love to speak at high schools and have a good background in marketing, but the best thing that qualifies me to write for this age group is that I’ve never quite grown up. I can clip Miss America’s manager in the #@! with a rubber band from 30 feet, can gargle the entire national anthem and not choke, and would still be winning belching contests against my daughter’s compatriots if she weren’t threatening constantly to disown me (she’s coming of age, so).

Sincerely,

Carol Plum-Ucci

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My Thoughts About this Literary Agent Query Letter Example

There are a lot of things to like about this literary agent query letter example. You can see my comments below, for each of the corresponding paragraphs.

Literary agency query letter example thoughts

Paragraph 1: Literary Agent Query Letter Example

Always address your pitch letter to an individual agent instead of saying “Dear Agent.” When it comes to compliments, paying them doesn’t guarantee you’ll get representation (but it can’t hurt). Just make sure your words are genuine, not flattery. And don’t be afraid to have a sense of humor.

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Paragraph 2: Literary Agent Query Letter Example

Carol used an unconventional format (with bullet points) in this literary agent query letter example, but content is king. Very few authors convey an understanding of their target market the way Carol did. When an author puts that much thought into her market, chances are she’s put the same kind of attention into her book. Don’t be discouraged if you don’t feel very knowledgeable about your genre yet. Go talk to your local librarian and/or bookseller about your book. Ask questions to help you better understand your market and the uniqueness of your work.

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When talking about the “competitive advantages” of your book, you need to do three things. Carol does all three expertly in this literary agent query letter example: 1) Demonstrate the fact that you’re knowledgeable about your target market and competition, 2) Show that you’ve incorporated, and capitalized on, certain things that are trendy or that other authors have done successfully, and 3) Explain how you’re also doing something fresh and unique.

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Carol continues to show her knowledge and mastery of the young adult genre. She then goes on to namedrop other bestselling authors (positive association), to help the reader understand what her writing style is like. Now, look at Carol’s literary agent query letter example again… and see if you can figure out what her book is about. She says nothing about the plot, but it doesn’t matter! Don’t go on and on about your story. Make sure you include at least one paragraph that helps book agents see your book in context.

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Carol was an unpublished novelist when she queried me, but she told me (wisely) that she’d written five novels and come close to getting published. Understanding Carol’s commitment made me trust her more. The closing of this literary agent query letter example is brilliant as well. Teenagers don’t do boring. So it was clever of Carol to inject her voice in her query, the same voice that I knew I’d later see in her novel. I could also tell, from Carol’s personality, that she would be popular with young adults (and easy for her publisher to promote, due to her boldness and humor).

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Conclusion: Literary Agent Query Letter Example

I hope you got a lot out of this literary agent query letter example. Don’t be stiff. Don’t think that you have to use a “professional” voice (use a voice that makes sense for your book genre). And don’t forget to put your book in context. Demonstrate your understanding of your target market, the way Carol did in her stunning literary agent query letter example.

Literary agency query letter example voice

Click here now to read the next article in this 17-part series and
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